This week we have been learning about Volcano's. We Learnt about rocks from volcano's. We learnt about how they erupt. We even learned about the four deterrent layers of the earth. Then once we had finished all the research we were able to make a volcano. after we made it we did a documentary about it then recorded erupting it. I hope you enjoy this video and please feel free to comment and show other people. Well good bye have a good day.
Monday, May 28, 2018
Tuesday, May 22, 2018
Painting a Picture in the reader's head.
WALT use our senses in our writing to paint a picture in the readers head.
Here is an example of my writing. Can you imagine the scenes in your head?

The soft sound of birds chirping filled the air. I could smell the fresh prey of a snake, rotting and filled with flies. Just before I stepped over a log with old moss on it I saw a snake slithering down the log. It looked ready to attack. I looked around and that was when I realized I had lost my travel guides. I noticed it was a python so I stepped off the log. My foot landed. It felt weird. Wait is that? A….a BABY SNAKE! I quickly dodged an attempt to get on my neck, it was from the mother snake. I started to run. I caught up with my travel guides and told them what happened.
Here is an example of my writing. Can you imagine the scenes in your head?
The soft sound of birds chirping filled the air. I could smell the fresh prey of a snake, rotting and filled with flies. Just before I stepped over a log with old moss on it I saw a snake slithering down the log. It looked ready to attack. I looked around and that was when I realized I had lost my travel guides. I noticed it was a python so I stepped off the log. My foot landed. It felt weird. Wait is that? A….a BABY SNAKE! I quickly dodged an attempt to get on my neck, it was from the mother snake. I started to run. I caught up with my travel guides and told them what happened.
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