Here is an example of my writing. Can you imagine the scenes in your head?
The soft sound of birds chirping filled the air. I could smell the fresh prey of a snake, rotting and filled with flies. Just before I stepped over a log with old moss on it I saw a snake slithering down the log. It looked ready to attack. I looked around and that was when I realized I had lost my travel guides. I noticed it was a python so I stepped off the log. My foot landed. It felt weird. Wait is that? A….a BABY SNAKE! I quickly dodged an attempt to get on my neck, it was from the mother snake. I started to run. I caught up with my travel guides and told them what happened.
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