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Monday, June 18, 2018

The Awful Plane Trip

Hello we have been working on hooking the reader in, creating writing with at least 4 pieces of action and being descriptive the whole way through. This is my story, I hope you like it.



My plane had just taken off. I was getting comfy. I was in first class. It was a one way flight to Tokyo, Japan. I got to eat chocolate, they offered me wine but I said, “No I will have grape juice.” But suddenly one of the planes engines made the loudest bang then the emergency masks came down.

I started to panic. I could hear people screaming. The pilot's voice appeared, “Please put on your masks, there is a slight issue.” For some stupid reason I looked out the window. The planes wing was covered in flames. That was when I started to panic. I must have hit my head at some point because I woke up not flying.

I stepped outside the plane my head was killing me. It smelt like a bomb had just gone off. All I could see was trees, all different type of trees. I looked behind myself that was when I saw the plane one wing floating in the water about 8 km away.  I could hear birds chirping, but the thing I could hear the most were people, people screaming and yelling for help.

I started to make my way into the forest. I just followed the screaming but the deeper into the forest I went the more it looked like someone was living there. I stepped around a tree but that was when I saw it. Four big men had tied up dozens of people, that was where the screaming was coming from. Then I saw the hand guns they were holding. I think one even had an AK-47. Suddenly I smelt rotting flesh. They… they were cannibals. I must have grasped because one of them yelled, “Get him!”

I woke up. I was tied up next to everyone else. How will I get out?  I will I survive, I thought to myself. I could not understand what they were saying but it sounded like they wanted to kill me. I was in a wooden cage. Next to me were animals, the rest of the people in my cage were not awake yet. The people did not know that I was awake yet.

Escape time. I started looking for a loose bar, a gap in the cage anything.  When everyone woke up we made a plan to get out of there. So here is the plan: First somebody plays sick when they come to get them out we all jump on the person steal his weapon and run. The plan was set in action.

Then all of sudden I was running with a handgun in my hand we did not know were we were running but we were running. I saw four rafts we had 4 groups of 5 on each raft. It was good to finally get to rest I think I had broken my shoulder blade. I felt intense stabs of pain in that area.  But then gunfire echoes round the sea. They were chasing us in sail boats. We had a head start so if we were quick we could lose them.

I saw an old boat up ahead with crates. We tied all the rafts together then 3 people started paddling at the front and 3 at the back. We all started yelling when we were close enough to the boat. Then someone fell off the raft.  A gunshot echoed across the waves. They were right behind us.

We climbed up onto the boat. They stopped shooting once we all got up but we lost about 3 people. Once we got to land I went straight to my house told my family what had happened. I needed about 2 months of counselling but I could finally talk about it with the world. So now I am here on this radio talk show. Well have a good night and thanks for listening.

The End