My birthday school trip to Spencer Park

W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.

• The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
• Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
• A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.

My birthday school trip to Spencer Park

On my birthday, Friday the 10th of March, Ako Ngatahi went to Spencer park. I was in group 4 n with Miss Scott and Whaea Heather. We got on the bus at about 9:15. The bus ride was noisy as everyone was excited. I sat next to my best friend Quaid on the bus.

When we go to Spencer park we played on the playground for 10 minutes. Then we started walking to the beach. At the beach we collected sea treasures. I got a lot of things. We were allowed by the water. I almost got a crab but I did get a star fish. For the sea treasure I got sticks and shells.

We then went on a big Lagoon walk. At the end of the Lagoon walk there was a bird hideout. Under the bird hide out there was a little tunnel.  

Then we got back and had lunch. Then we had a big play for like an hour. We all had fruit.

Lastly we got on the bus and arrived back at school. I learnt the white things in the bushes were spider nests. They build them to protect their babies until they grow up.