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Wednesday, September 13, 2017

Ball Pit Writing

We have been writing about a video I hope you enjoy.
Here a link to the video: Link
I was terrified at the McDonald's playground. I was at the highest slide in the world. Well that's what it felt like. I was going to go down the giant slide at the ball pit. I was too scared of how high it was I did not notice that no one had come back out of it.  Could I die? I hope not. All I could think was Am I going to go down? Without thinking I jumped into the slide head first.

As I am going down the slide it felt amazing. I was zooming through the slide. CRASH! I fall into the ball pit but instead of stopping I kept going. I stopped myself from falling any deeper. I was right on the edge. About to fall then I looked to my right and there was an old lollipop. I got scared and pulled it off.

I started climbing up the wall, the wall was as big as a skyscraper. A few minutes later I was half way but it still looked giant. I tried to put my hand on one of the balls but I almost fell. I was hanging on with one hand. A old plaster fell right on top of my face. I pulled myself up. There was a broken lollipop next to my a perfect shape to use as a climbing lollipop.  I started climbing again it took a long time but I finally got to the top. I was so happy I put the lollipop in my mouth.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jasper it's me Sam I like your video But it was to short so member to make it longer so we can see what you have been learning about at swimming.

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